Nicely penned, Claudia. Interesting that you use the water element which is usually the symbol of life and also of emotions according to psychology. In this case, the previous line with the word “control” suggests a pleasant image; the water is under control and not a devastating thing. Love the concision of your poem and thank you so much for the follow.
succinct delight. 🙂
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Nicely penned, Claudia. Interesting that you use the water element which is usually the symbol of life and also of emotions according to psychology. In this case, the previous line with the word “control” suggests a pleasant image; the water is under control and not a devastating thing. Love the concision of your poem and thank you so much for the follow.
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Oh WOW!
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